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Nice one!

ArezOfficial responds:

Thank you :)

Normally I would give some feedback but honestly I don't hear anything wrong. I'm blown away. Awesome work!

ArezOfficial responds:

Thanks so much :D

Nice song, very well put together. My only note is that the mixing and mastering could use a little more work. Sounds really good otherwise.

ArezOfficial responds:

Thanks for the advice and kind words :D

I like the melody; it has a nice feel to it. I imagine this song continuing in a couple different directions. You could keep it calm and just change up your chord progressions for some variety, or you could introduce faster drums and throw in some bass for a more D&B experience. Just a couple of ideas to try if you're feeling stuck. :P

Surkol responds:

Ty for the review. \(★ω★)/
Yea maybe adding a bass and makin some similar chord progression is a good continuation. If I had made my own drumloop it would feel easier to change that. It's like I hit a brickwall when I get stuck. It's hard not to deviate too much from the original when making a bridge. I also feel that It can become too repetitive if I just add the same melody at the end. Hmm I'll think about it and try some stuff.

Definitely like your new version better. I really like how it builds up to the guitar. It's always nice to look back on older projects for comparison and inspiration.

Nice composition! My only thought is that it could use some more dynamics. Other than that, nice work.

Not bad, I like the drums in the beginning.

An inspiring composition. It's all put together well. I had to turn the volume way up to hear it though, and as a result the brass was a bit loud at 0:40. Consider lowering the brass just a bit, or bringing everything else up.
Keep up the good work. :)

Don't be so hard on yourself; it isn't doing you any favors. There are plenty of people (myself included) on NG who are willing to mix and/or master, and even teach you a thing or two if you're willing to learn.
Your song is quite nice on its own, even without mixing or mastering.

Sillytune responds:

Sorry for late response, i'm a little bit afk these days.

Eh, thanks for the feedback mate, i'll work on improving, it just comes with time i guess.

If you have any tips that you could spare regarding mixing, i'm all ears :)

Very inspiring work. I especially like the piano.

CloakedSoup responds:

Thank you! :D I'll be working hard to keep improving.

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Aaron @AceMantra

Age 33

Musician

Digital Media and Cinema

Edmonton, Canada

Joined on 4/8/05

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