AceMantra's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Faith and Heaven]

Well crafted and inspirational as always. It makes me want to jump onto my DAW and make something right now actually.
I don't have much advice for this track unfortunately. Keep striving to do better, and keep experimenting. You're doing great!

zybor responds:

thank you for your review! :D

[Spark of Hope in the Sorrow]

It baffles me how strong some can be when facing the darkest of times. Despite all the struggle you still manage to submit something, and I find that very inspiring. I understand what it’s like to experience hardship; Major Depression has been with me since early adolescence. I know it gets to a point when even basic things like eating is too hard to do.

Even when your heart ceases to function, your music will continue to beat for many years to come. In the moment of certain death, it is important to realize that right now you are alive and you still have time to voice your thoughts. You can still show people that you exist and this is what you’re going through.

As far as your musical piece goes, I don’t really have anything of note. I think the title matches the composition quite well.

zybor responds:

it's important to keep on with the things in your life. i like to remind myself that even if there wasn't anyone else to stand with you there, you will have to keep going. i want to live and thrive in this world. there are so much stuff i haven't had a chance to see and feel.

don't give up like i did. keep going and give yourself a reason to move on.

thank you for your review! it means a lot! take care!

[Memory Malfunction]

This is what I love about art. There are rules to follow, but you can always break those rules as long as you have a reason for doing so. In your case you’re experimenting and pushing your limits, and that’s a good thing. You never know what you’re capable of until you try, right?

zybor responds:

thank you for the review! always push the boundaries for more new stuff! that's how we should learn!

[Fantazy]

I like the melody; it has a nice feel to it. I imagine this song continuing in a couple different directions. You could keep it calm and just change up your chord progressions for some variety, or you could introduce faster drums and throw in some bass for a more D&B experience. Just a couple of ideas to try if you're feeling stuck. :P

Surkol responds:

Ty for the review. \(★ω★)/
Yea maybe adding a bass and makin some similar chord progression is a good continuation. If I had made my own drumloop it would feel easier to change that. It's like I hit a brickwall when I get stuck. It's hard not to deviate too much from the original when making a bridge. I also feel that It can become too repetitive if I just add the same melody at the end. Hmm I'll think about it and try some stuff.

[Transient Afterglow (Updated)]

Definitely like your new version better. I really like how it builds up to the guitar. It's always nice to look back on older projects for comparison and inspiration.

[Hard Edges]

Nice composition! My only thought is that it could use some more dynamics. Other than that, nice work.

[Joy]

Not bad, I like the drums in the beginning.