AceMantra's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fantazy]

I like the melody; it has a nice feel to it. I imagine this song continuing in a couple different directions. You could keep it calm and just change up your chord progressions for some variety, or you could introduce faster drums and throw in some bass for a more D&B experience. Just a couple of ideas to try if you're feeling stuck. :P

Surkol responds:

Ty for the review. \(★ω★)/
Yea maybe adding a bass and makin some similar chord progression is a good continuation. If I had made my own drumloop it would feel easier to change that. It's like I hit a brickwall when I get stuck. It's hard not to deviate too much from the original when making a bridge. I also feel that It can become too repetitive if I just add the same melody at the end. Hmm I'll think about it and try some stuff.

[Transient Afterglow (Updated)]

Definitely like your new version better. I really like how it builds up to the guitar. It's always nice to look back on older projects for comparison and inspiration.

[Hard Edges]

Nice composition! My only thought is that it could use some more dynamics. Other than that, nice work.

[Joy]

Not bad, I like the drums in the beginning.

[Soft Light]

An inspiring composition. It's all put together well. I had to turn the volume way up to hear it though, and as a result the brass was a bit loud at 0:40. Consider lowering the brass just a bit, or bringing everything else up.
Keep up the good work. :)

[Goodbye, Now and Forever]

Very inspiring work. I especially like the piano.

CloakedSoup responds:

Thank you! :D I'll be working hard to keep improving.

[You, Me and the Stars]

Simply bliss, very nice work. About the drums, I personally think they fit well overall but it really depends on what you're going for. Heavier drums won't necessarily make the song sound better, but it will make it sound different. Louder drums will give a solid beat, but it's possible they may start competing with other elements within the track. Softer drums lay down a good foundation allowing for the melody and ambience to come through, but will lack the impact you might be looking for. Again, it depends on what you're going for.

Pro tip: Try not to mix and master your songs on headphones. Invest in some studio audio monitors if you can, or use computer speakers at the very least if you're on a budget.

Great job. Keep it up. :)

AlexMaden responds:

I was aiming for the third option, Softer drums to allow the melody and ambience to come through. Also thanks for the tip! I do not have an amazing budget atm, but if my interest in music stays like this and only grows, I'll be sure to get better equipment in the future. d:

[Bliss]

Wow, really nice track you have there. Very ambient and "feel good". I wish I could find something to critique, but I honestly can't find any flaws in this track. Good job.